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2011-7-6 22:34 阅读(11)

四级考试刚刚告一段落的时候,我需要做的第一件事当然就是把资料都收拾好了,很自然地就拿起了作文草稿。每天9分钟的自由写作我基本都按部就班地做好了,几个星期积累下来也有好多页呢,自己看着也着实吃了一惊。里面有数不尽的红色笔迹,除了遍地开花的修改之外,最多的就是俩词了——”to be improved”和”Chinglish”。翻来翻去,就那么一篇比较干净,留下的”very good”让我很受鼓励!写了几十篇就这一篇被肯定了啊!给自己留个纪念,指不定哪天就找不到,更想不起了。

成品如下:
Last Sunday, we volleyball fans includingvolleyball association members and others went to another college near ours for friendly matches. After about half an hour of practice, the matches began. The first turn is for girls. 1 of our girls could make attack hits over the net and 2 could use the palm to hit the ball into the opponents’ court and the rest merely had basic skills. However, our opponents could only use their two arms to receive and pass the ball, it meant that they could not jump to hit the ball . But we were shocked by the result that we lost the first set. What I could summarise was that keeping your performance steady was the priority. It would make the match boring to view but lead to winning. I continued to be a spectator but I found our girls changed their strategy just like I thought. The match would be won by the first team to get 2 sets, and with no suspense our team won. The next match for boys was so easy because opponents couldn’t even receive our services. So, all of us came back with glory.

翻译:
上个星期天,我们排球迷们,包括协会成员和其他人,为了友谊赛一起去了附近的大学。大约半个小时的练习(其实是想表达“热身”)之后,比赛开始了。第一场是女生们的比赛。我们女生当中有1人可以在网上完成进攻性击球(可以理解为“扣球”),另外2个可以用手掌将球击向对方场区,剩下的仅有基本技能。可是,我们的对手只会用双臂接球和传球,这意味着她们不会跳起来击球。但是我们为结果所震惊,我们输掉了第一局。我所能作出的总结便是,保持发挥的稳定应是最先考虑的事。这会让比赛很难看,但是能够导至胜利。我继续作为一个观众观赛,但我发现我们的女生们改变了她们的策略,这策略和我想的一样。先胜2局者将赢得比赛,我们的队伍毫无悬念地胜出。接下来的男生比赛简直是唾手可得,因为对方甚至都不会接我们的发球。所以,我们凯旋归来。

这中文要表达的意思,其实也就是一小学生的水平嘛。

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